Solus.EXE

[Bloodstained Angel]

Name: Solus.EXE
Age: Unknown
Build: Late Teenage Years, Perfect Muscular Build
Skin Color: White
Hair Color: Gray
Eye Color: Gray
Weight: Middle-weight class. With equipment, net equivalent of 165 lbs
Height: 5 ft 11 in
Likes: Unknown
Dislikes: Weakness
Hobbies: Unknown
Acts: Likes to act solo and only talks to those whom he deems worthy. He only trains and fights with whom he sees fit.
Thoughts: Depressed and lonely. Death has followed him his whole life. He has been cycled through three Operators, all dead, giving him a bleak lookout on life.
Description: Gray hair and gray eyes give a lifeless appearance, and highlight the red stripe made under his right eye, as if a line of tears were painted over down his cheek and to his jaw. His headband pushes back his contemporary spiked anime-style hair, and blends in rather nicely, even though its dark brown, old leather, with his Icon in the center as a stone pendant. He has a very long crimson scarf wrapped loosely around his neck and hanging over his shoulders, stretching all the way down to the top of his ankles. He wears a full, long-sleeve, smoke-gray vest, its collars raised enough to cover his face from the sides, and a silver zipper in the center. The vest is thin, but as strong as any other Navi's armor, and has white trimming around the top of the collar. The lower half of his body is un-armored, sans for a few obvious places, and he appears to be wearing black and baggy pants. At times he likes to be called "Jason", which was his operator's name and the name his bank account is under; he is also seen with large, silver wings sometimes... though not often.
Element: Summon
HP: 300
Lv. 1
EXP: 0
Zenny: 1,000
BF(BugFrags): 10
ATK: ***
SPD: **
RPD: **
Data Boost: Thin Shadow

Natural Abilities:

I: Solus Cannon
Element: Summon
Description: Massive cannon materializes in Solus' right hand, and he fires an orange blast of energy at the opponent's chest or Icon. Locks on. Can harm invisible/intangible navigators.
Dmg: 30
Type: Projectile

II: Meteor Knuckle
Element: Null
Description: Solus jumps into the sky and crashes to the ground with his fist! Aimed at head or panels to crack.
Dmg: 30
Type: Physical

III: Solemn Sword
Element: Summon
Description: Silverish Blue sword bluntly bashes through weak defenses and deals massive damage. Aimed at arms, legs, and ribs. Rarely spine. Is dull.
Dmg: 30
Type: Physical

IV: Charge
Element: Null
Description: A negative charge resembling lightning attacks the opponent, though its neutral, having no special effects...
Dmg: 20
Type: Projectile

V: Cross Beam
Element: Summon
Description: Laser Locks on from space, and fires. Creates cross shape on ground, four panels long, three panels wide (at branches).
Dmg: 30
Type: Projectile


Special Ability:

I: Negativity
Element: Summon
Description: Summons two clones made from shadow, and a massive giant known as Negativity. Negativity is basically the spawn of Solus' Darkness. Created for protection, and attack.
Dmg:
Clones have access to two natural abilities.
Negativity does a total of 90 dmg, combining attacks from all three summoned creatures.
Type: Physical(?)


II: Solus Rutilus
Element: Summon
Description: Red, dull sword painted red with blood. Aimed at Spine ALWAYS.
Dmg: 90
Type: Physical

III: Cosmic Knuckle
Element: Null
Description: Charge and Meteor Knuckle are combined to form a more powerful fist-based attack!
Dmg: 100
Type: Physical

Defensive Ability:

I: Battle Stance
Able to withstand 50 dmg.
Element: Summon
Description: Stance entered for 1 turn. For every hit, its +10 to Meteor Knuckle or Solemn Sword, one of which follow immediately after.

II: Battle Stance Omega
Able to withstand 100 dmg.
Element: Summon
Description: Same as the original, only Solus Rutilus or Negativity follow afterward.

Battle Chips:

Programs:

None

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Still not sure I understand the damage ranges. Since I don't know what's considered reasonable here, I'm going by what the average power of standard chips are, which generally ranges from 10-150.

[Unknown Fate 전]

To answer your questions first..

I didn't give a seperate element for Ice. I combined it with water, soo I don't know where you got that.
And for Cursor as an element, well, I combined it with Summon/Obstacle because if I were to Cursor, it would give an uneven amount of elements.

Since you can't use chips, I'll allow you to..
+2 Natural Abilities
+1 Special Ability
+1 Defense Ability

To work your navi into the story, I'm guessing you should at least state what dorm he is helping or whatnot, otherwise you're going to have to create an operator.

[Bloodstained Angel]

Hrm... I kinda forget the dorm descriptions... I think it was Trill Yellow that had the most powerful? Which ever one it was. He prefers to be with the more powerful, to teach and to learn in return.

[Unknown Fate 전]

To be honest, none of them are stronger than the others. They're all the same equally, the only differences between them are the Dorm Viruses and the Dorm Chips. Soo yeah.

[Bloodstained Angel]

Finished. Only thing missing is damage, since I do not know the ranges for each attack type, and the limits.

[Unknown Fate 전]

For Natural Abilities, damage is done by your ATK and times it by 10.

Special Abilities, all you have to do is make it up yourself, it doens't even have to be damage, but just make it reasonable.

Your Defense Abilities, block damages waaaay too high. So decrease it please.

And the ranges for attacks are Physical, upclose. Projectile, far away.

This RP isn't based on a grid lined map.

[Bloodstained Angel]

*Goes to edit*

I know. I don't base my RP on grid lined maps either, but the usage of the term panels becomes too natural ^^;

I use it as a mere decription of the size of the area affected (Two by Four panels, a six panel long attack, etc.)

Anyway... I'll get on the editing.

[Unknown Fate 전]

It would be helpful if you posted that you edited.

But your some of your natural abilities are stronger than they should be. Meaning it should be at 30. And please elaborate what Negativity is, I'm kind of confused.

And bring down the damage of the Special Abilities a bit, they're too strong for a level 1 navi for right now.

[Bloodstained Angel]

I still think it would help to have the damage Maxs and Mins somewhere =P

Anyway... In the words of Frank Caliendo acting like George W. Bush: "Its modificated, gobble-gobble!"

[Unknown Fate 전]

Minimum would be 0 to the maximum, would be anything above 100.

And I would say Negativity is more of a Special Attack rather than a Natural one.

[Bloodstained Angel]

Okay. I have *hopefully* made my final modification.

[Unknown Fate 전]

Eh.. I just noticed, you have two elements for your navi. Only have one. And you need elements for most of your attacks.

[Bloodstained Angel]

Well, it wasn't clear how many elements I could have. Generally its two. But...

Also, the "Normal" element is just that. Its neutral. It is but isn't an element.

[Unknown Fate 전]

Actually, generally Elements for navis are just one.

And Normal I know isn't an element, like Null, but everything needs an Element, except for Virus Attacks, well some. It has to follow with the weakness, strong against strategy.

[Bloodstained Angel]

Well, that's the thing. Where it gets a bit complex.

Null element is always there. You don't HAVE to use the same element. Does Airman always use Air element attacks? Does Shademan only use Dark attacks? No. The weakness system goes on what the base element of the navigator is. If its programmed to be Summon, that's always its weak/strong point. The Null attacks are optional.