Grand & Coal.EXE

[grandaris]

-Operator
Name: Grand
Age: 16
Build: Average
Skin Color: White
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Green
Weight: 150lbs.
Height: 5'8

Likes:
Finds it funny by doing a complete 180 with his personality.
Enjoys the outdoors as much as he loves playing video games.
Loves standing out in the rain during a Thunder Storm.

Dislikes:
Hates people that feel like they're all that and think no one can bet them.

Hobbies:
Netbattleing
Working on his website of NexusCoreX

Acts:
In public Grand acts shy and will hide in plan site to over hear conversations meant to be private, but he really acts confident.

Thoughts:
Never enters a situation without thinking about it.

Description:
Grand is a just an average guy with an average life. Usually seen wearing a sky blue button up shirt over a navy blue short T-shirt and dark green cargo pants.

Dorm: (Will be chosen by a staff member)

Home: cyper city


-Navi
Name: Coal.EXE
Age: 16
Build: average
Skin Color: white

Hair Color: brown with streams of dark blue and sky blue running through it.

Eye Color: green
Weight: 200lbs.
Height: 5'8
Likes: netbattling
Dislikes: everything other then netbattling
Hobbies: netbattling
Acts: makes quick choices, never thinks things through.
Thoughts: believes its better to act then to do nothing at all.
Description: Coal is a very aggressive Navi with the love of battle burned into his soul. He'll battle anyone, anytime, anywhere, without a problem.
Element: Lightning
HP: 300
Lv. 1
Exp: 0
Zennies: 1000
BugFrags: 10
ATK: 7
SPD: 7
RPD: 7
Data Manipulation: Power Station
Element Exchange: Sword
Data Boost: Thin Shadow
Natural Ability:

#1
Name: Lighting Claw
Damage: 70
Element: lighting
Range: Physical
Description: Coal charges up is right arm into a deadly right hook.

#2
Name: Guidance
Damage: 30
Element: lighting
Range: Projectile
Effect: Guidance effects the entire battle field causing damage to both the opponent and the caster.(basically it causes 30 damage to everyone even Coal.)
Description: Coal fires a controlled burst of energy into the sky causing bolts of lighting to rain from above.

#3
Name: Big Bang
Damage: 70
Element: lighting
Range: Physical
Effect: stuns Coal for one turn after use.
Description: Coal attach's himself to his opponent while gathering energy around him.

Special Ability:

#1
Name: Diamond Dust
Damage: 5
Element: lightning
Range: projectile
Effect: causes 5dmg over 3turns
Description: Coal focuses energy to his palm and releases it in a giant burst.

Defense Ability

#1
Name: Natures Wrath
Description: is able to resist half of all lighting based attacks.

F.E.A.R

Name: Shadow of Vengeance
Element: shadow
Range:
Description: Shadow of Vengeance is caused when Coal goes into an unstoppable rage. Coal is engulfed into black flames and does damage equal to the amount of health he has left. As a result of Shadow of Vengeance Coal loses the total amount of health left at the end of the turn.

Battle Chips:
AreaSteal - You don't get hurt for 1 turn. And you get to attack twice - Null

WideSword - 80 Damage - Sword

Cannon - 40 Damage - Null

CrackShot - 60 Damage - Break

Recover 10 - Heals 10 HP - Health

[Ace]

Lightning would be Elec, and there is no Shadow/Dark element. I'd say Invis. And the F.E.A.R. is too powerful, for example, if he had 300 HP, and the other had 300, instawin. Make it around 1-80 damage for the beginning. And Recoil damage is equal to half of that attack's damage. And Diamond Dust should do probably 7 or 10 damage in that turn, because the enemy could easily block the "Dust". And in the description of the attacks, don't just put what happens before the attacks, put what happens when they're executed.

That's all I could find, for now.

[Kyn Azleos Roya]

You left out the fact that it should be seven stats between the ATK SPD and RPD, not seven in each.

[Ace]

Ah, yes. I forgot to look at those. For this navi, I'd say maybe 3 ATK, 2(or 3)SPD, and 2(or 1) RPD.